Pitch Reflection

In the pitch I presented with my partner Daniel I honestly think that we both delivered the facts on who our audience is. When presenting our pitch we mentioned that we are focusing the advert mainly on people who are around the ages of 10-21 we are also targeting the advert at the whole family since it is a type of advert that is suitable for everyone and there is content that is good for the whole family to enjoy.  We mentioned in our pitch that we are playing the advert on “channel 4”, this still shows that we are wanting our advert to be a advert that the whole family will see and enjoy together, due to the fact that channel 4 has TV shows like “The Simpsons” which is a show that the whole family can enjoy, we thought that it is the perfect channel to include our advert in.

In our pitch we mentioned a lot of the product research that we have done for our advert.  One of the first things that we have done for our product research was looking at the actual advert made for “Turkish Delight”. When we were watching the advert we saw that it had content that made the advert something that was basically impossible for us to do. Due to the fact that we could not do an advert similar to the original so we searched on the internet for ideas, we managed to find this one video that has a group of friends who tried a “Turkish Delight” and then started acting like turkeys. When seeing the fan made advert we thought that we would go for a similar idea, unfortunately we could not since sir said to not copy someone else’s idea, so he gave us the idea to make a advert about a man carefully cutting a “Turkish Delight” and then sprinkling salt on it just like the famous internet trend “Salt Bae” so we went with the idea.

We have mentioned that one of the people in our group actually went out and asked a lot of people different questions that will help us figure out what the final advert will be like. When all of the questions have been asked by people outside we made pie charts that contained all of the information we gained from the amount of responses received. When doing the presentation of our pitch we presented our idea very well as we revealed that it has been changed due to the fact that sir did not like the idea that we were copying somebody else’s idea so he gave us the idea and we mentioned that it is a very simple advert is easy to understand and that will make sure that everyone will enjoy the advert.

If there is one thing that I would say that I would want to improve my pitch on would be making sure that the person I am working with knows all of the slides so he knows what to say when presenting the pitch instead of making stuff up on the spot and reading off the board, even though he presented the pitch well, that was one issue that could have been avoided to make the pitch better.